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lizbeth490021
26th Jun 2021, 4:00 PM

Pages are being uploaded here gradually for buzz.
Note that my work contains 18+ content.

Patrons of my Patreon receive early access to my work, including comic pages as they are being produced and completed.

All publicly released pages are on my website.

I'm currently most active on Twitter.

Thank you for your patience.

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sigpig
26th Jun 2021, 4:20 PM

I'm assuming it's a combination of the trauma from the fight, and the trauma from being in the Anaether in the first place?
And that the shortest distance between their two locations is to leave the Anaether and then re-enter it; as opposed to travelling within it?

So far, it's looking to me like they can "survive" in the Anaether, but only for a limited amount of time, and some are more succeptible than others...

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lizbeth490021
30th Jun 2021, 3:52 AM

Oh, thanks so much for this feedback, this is super helpful to me. You're actually mostly correct, I think. I'm really glad the most important parts of the visual storytelling is coming through correctly.

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sigpig
30th Jun 2021, 12:59 PM

This prelude feels like the opening scene of a James Bond movie - the ones where either another "Double-Oh" meets his maker on a mission, or where Bond performs a wacky escape, and then the opening credits start. There's no exposition, most times it's a chase scene, and there's a LOT of campy action.

I see now that there is also a physical transformation, at least for one member of the group.

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lizbeth490021
6th Jul 2021, 5:21 PM

I'm glad you're finding similarities to exciting action films in my work. I really appreciate your continued interest, thanks so much.

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