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lizbeth490021
26th Jun 2020, 4:37 AM

The initial 20 pages have been released on:

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Jason Moon
27th Jun 2020, 7:31 PM

Lost all hope

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lizbeth490021
30th Jun 2020, 7:20 AM

I suppose I would too if that happened to me.

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Prototype
31st Jul 2020, 8:47 PM

Gorgeous artwork. Its an interesting mix of detailed characters and speed painted backgrounds.
I feel that most of the speech balloons doesn't really fit the comic at all however. In the second panel here for example, the balloons and text are absolutely massive.

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lizbeth490021
31st Jul 2020, 10:51 PM

thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, it really means a lot to me.

I agree with your comments on the speech bubbles. But as I'd mentioned in one of the first pages, this chapter is a prototype chapter where there will be style changes because I'm still trying to hash out what everything looks like, including stuff like the speech bubbles. I'd only go back and revise the work if I really want to, but for now I'm investing most of my time in moving forward with new work.

I truly appreciate you taking the time to look at my work and to share your thoughts.

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